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Jealous

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Jealous

I feel the flame
It burns inside
So much for love
I guess it died
Now there’s something
Deep within
That’s telling me
I have to win
This can’t be fair,
They have no right
To take from me
My precious light
I’ll show them, damn
I’ll show them yet
For what I give
They’ll not forget
The rage and pain
Of my neglect
Will be all that
They can detect
My built up envy
All my rage
I must release it
Break this cage
Oh god, my jealousy
All my rage
I must release it
Break this cage…
*jealous jealous jealous*
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The line: "Will me all that they can detect" doesn't really work all that well with the poem. It doesn't roll off my tongue too well..... Other than that I loved it. OH YEAH. Kudos to you! *dies of delight* :thumb84918712: